I redid some of my icons since last critique on color. So my ring is in a ring box and my characters have more grown up shoes.




Yup. My 2 colors is now just simple where the "details" is highlighted. My 3 color is having a peach/coral (which i changed from the dark pink) as a background offset without variation. Much better yea? I'm sure there could be more improvements but I say these are much better than the old set I had.
These improvements certainly help communicate the story better.
ReplyDeleteStill to fix:
The scale of the ring is too small compared to the box and other icons (watch the line weight).
The man's shoe is a bit feminine (narrow). The women's shoe needs some of the gaps that the other icons have (maintain consistency).