These were due on Wednesday for critique with some seniors. None of them are really working. They are kind of out of order but it basically goes harmonious and then amplified drama, back and forth like that. I had to fix basically everything. It seemed better when I follow my icon's curve so that the placement dictates the form (like the scarf). So I took that and applied it for the set due today (Friday). I'll post that later but I think there's improvement for sure, even if it is just tiny steps.