Drowning at Sea
- wooden boat
- anchor
- rope
- straw hat
- heavy waves
- dried food (fish, vegetables, etc.)
- canteen
- tire wheels
- worn out shorts
- torn shirts
- knives
- tarp
Take a stroll
- dried leaves
- bare branches
- sitting benches
- wooden fence
- bikes
- headphones
- music player
- converse shoes
- ballet flats
- scarves
- light jacket
- engagement ring
I'm leaning towards the "Take a stroll" story more so I think that is the one I am going to stick with. I'm not sure if the title is appropriate for it or not. Right now, it seems like it is the one but if I was to change it, I have no idea what it will be yet.
the engagement ring is either out of place, or needs additional objects to help clarify that point in the story. bikes confuses "walk". and twice you have two objects that represent a singular idea. Choose one and delete the other.
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