I reworked my words from last class and I think they work in general. They are much improved from what I had before I think. I reposted the haiku so people can reference it better.
Night is bright with stars
...silly woman, whimpering:
Shall I light the lamp?
- Etsujin
Line 1
1. calm
2. quiet
3. relaxed
4. cloudless
5. empty
6. bright
7. dark
8. breeze
9. moonlit
10. luminous
Line 2
11. whimpering
12. longing
13. remembering
14. lonely
15. simpleminded
16. earrings
17. handkerchief
18. tissue
19. hair stick
20. hair tie
Line 3
21. radiant
22. friendship
23. invulnerable
24. pity
25. warmth
26. match
27. candle
28. candle stand
29. candle wick
30. candle wax
The last line was tricky since there are many types of lamps. So I thought about the time period and where this poem was made and decided to stick with a candle lamp, but one that is super simple with a holder that is something like this:
Yup. :D
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